Suddenly, Katrina jolted as if struck by lightening.
“Hey lets go to the park!” She said almost jumping, with a glint of naughtiness in her eyes.
“Uh…But…” Before Shaun could protest he had his shoes on and was walking towards the local park behind his hostel. It was a deserted place where lovers flocked during the evening to make out and canoodle. Shaun hated public display of affection. He kept his eye open for any sign of life around – it was almost 1am and not a soul was in sight. Katrina plopped herself down on a patch of grass which was wet with dew and pulled Shaun down next to her. Holding his hand she began to talk…she told him about how much she enjoyed painting but never got a chance to paint. Amidst her chattering Shaun kept thinking how much he was in love with her…when suddenly, out of the blue she asked about his girlfriends - catching him off guard again.
Shaun shyly admitted that he never had any; he was always interested in fulfilling his parents dreams of staying focused and becoming a good doctor…Suddenly he wasn’t too certain that was the only thing he wanted anymore. Katrina giggled and leaned over and kissed his cheek. Shaun let his hands glide over her back as he gently stroked her hair. She shivered as he ran his fingers down her back. He whispered in her ear, asking if she was alright. She responded by grabbing Shaun’s tshirt and tumbling them both over, down the slope into a fresh patch of grass. She pinned Shaun down with both her hands and chuckled wickedly.
“I’ve got you now. What shall I do to you!”Shaun was utterly shocked by this sudden burst of energy, he felt himself getting hard. “No! No! No!” He panicked and broke into a sweat.
Still ontop of him Katrina began to laugh loudly as she released her prisoner and lay next to him in the grass. By this time the moon was now lower than usual and the stars twinkled in the sky; Katrina snuggled close and buried her face into Shaun’s chest – listening to his heartbeat. Shaun put his arm around her, as if protecting her from the cool breeze that brushed past her and brought whiffs of her sweet smelling skin to him.
He wanted to make love to her so bad but he was afraid of how she might react. From what he knew – Katrina was a very sensitive girl – a kind of female peter pan; the girl who never grew up. The last thing he wanted to do was freak her out, she had been so good to him. Suddenly a faint sniffle broke his chain of thought – “Oh no! She’s crying,” he thought to himself. He looked down to see tears rolling down her cheek and drenching his tshirt.
“Hey are you alright?” he asked ever so gently. Praying that she hadn’t noticed him stiffening up and gotten upset.
“I love you Shaun,” she managed to murmur in between her sobs. Shaun tilted her head up and gently kissed her forehead.
“I love you too Katrina, I always have. But I could never admit it because…” She cut him short by kissing his lips. Her soft tender lips felt like velvet against his skin. She was an angel he thought to himself – I will never hurt her. He gently slipped his hand inside her sweatshirt and felt beads of sweat on her back.
“Are you alright sweetheart?” He asked as he gently caressed her back, trying to avoid going near her bra strap for fear of frightening his little deer.
“I’m fine…Just be gentle” At that Shaun’s hand froze. He felt as though something was amiss. He quickly retrieved his senses and took his hand out of her sweatshirt. She looked at him with puzzled eyes…looking even more mesmerising in the moonlight.
“What happened? Why did you stop?” She asked quizzically.
“Look Kat, you’re an amazing girl and I really love you. I don’t want to do anything to hurt you. You don’t have to do this if you don’t want to…”
Before he could complete his sentence, Katrina had taken off her sweatshirt and had snuggled back into his embrace. Wearing nothing but a black sports bra and her shorts. Shaun was shocked…pleasantly surprised. He couldn’t think…he didn’t want to. He was going to enjoy this moment. Her nipples felt hard against his chest. He felt goose bumps form on her smooth skin as he stroked her exposed arm. They kissed again. She suddenly turned over and lay on her back and stared at the stars. Shaun stopped in his tracks, watching every move so he wouldn’t screw up. He turned onto his side and drew circles around her bellybutton. She turned her head and rubbed her nose against his. They kissed again. Slowly she began working his shirt off as she rolled him onto his back and climbed up ontop. She kissed Shaun all over his body ever so gently. Shaun could feel really hard and horny now. He didn’t know what to do. He was unsure how far he wanted to go with this beautiful damsel. Katrina’s body shivered as Shaun ran his fingers down her waist. He gently unhooked her bra strap, exposing her glorious chest. The sight of her round full breasts made him break into a cold sweat. He lay her down and held her in his arms – covering her from the world. Gently he began to caress her nipples with his hands as she unbuttoned his jeans. Before they knew it, both of them were lying naked in each other’s arms. Holding each other close for warmth. Shaun kissed the back of her ear and her neck as her naked body quivered in his arms.
“Be gentle,” She said quietly…staring into his eyes with eyes full of love and expectation.Shaun was no expert but he had watched enough porn to know what he was doing. He gently worked with her body. Kissing, caressing, licking…as she arched her back and let out a slight moan. Once he had assured him self that she was ready he gently entered her, being careful not to apply too much pressure. Slowly he penetrated and made sweet love. She gasped and tightened her grip as she clamped down on her teeth to keep from yelling at the top of her voice – more out of pleasure than pain. After the lovemaking, Shaun held Katrina close in his arms and ran his fingers down her back and gently stroked her hair. They lay naked on the dew dripping grass, lost in each other’s arms like two lovers; unaware of the world. Katrina clung onto Shaun like a child holding a teddy bear. There was a tsunami of emotions setting off in Shaun’s head. He knew he had found his calling. His meaning of life was in his arms. He had found a driving force in his otherwise mundane life.
“Will you be with me forever Katrina?” He asked gently, while stroking her cheek.
“Forever and for always,” She replied with an innocent gleam on her face.
12 comments:
Kapila,
You have a really interesting way of narrating a story. The reader is kept on his toes and is eager to know what's going to happen next! That's the mark of a budding writer!lol ok but the sex scenes were a bit graphic![ mind you I don't belong to any RSS or such extremist groups!] I have nothing against graphic description! The thing is if you could find a way to describe body parts or the love making scenes in a very subtle way then it'll have a greater impact than using the name of the body parts! for example, had you said "they made love under the stars" that would've been much more exciting! lol I don't know I'm no writer myself but anyway just thought I should let you know what I think of your story! Otherwise the story is extremely cute!
thanks alot vishwas - this was actually the first time i tried my hand at writing umm...soft porn?? or whatever its called...i wanted to see how far i could go interms of describing umm...censored stuff so to speak - normally i am very poetic and discrete when it comes to describing such things!
@kapila
Man if I had to try my hand at writing sex scenes or whatever its called as you said, then I'd have utilized both my hands!! one for writing and the other for..well..I'll leave that to your imagination! lol ok no offence! but the sex scenes came a bit as a surprise in that I was mildly taken aback though I quickly stopped my mind from wandering into unknown territory!!!lol
poetic? as in.. one hummingbird flew from one daisy to another pollinating it so it would fertilize and a new baby daisy would be born..
*falls off chair laughing.
so when did you transition from poems to (I frankly don't know what you call that)? Interesting read for sure. You look good. Nice to see you again, Kapila. Keep writing! PS: If you don't want me to post comments anymore, delete this one, I'll get it. Take care, Austin
@austin
transition from poetry to prose...it just happened...I'm too brain-dead for poetry i guess...keep posting - i need people like you to read the crap my brain churns out!
ok, positively shocked for 2 reasons: 1. Not only did you not delete my comment, you actually replied to it! 2. You went and posted comments on my poems! What were you thinking???? Is it ok now? I'm confused :-( BTW, you posted comments on two poems that you had once commented on, remember? Funny, isn't it? Sigh... And no, the poet is definitely not alive anymore. Hehe. I actually go back to these little piles of shit once in a while, just to laugh at all the stuff I used to write. I've definitely grown up since then. Anyway, I'm more into photography now. If you ever happen to visit my orkut profile, you'll see some amateur stuff. You know how to find me :-) I'd like it if we could catch up sometime. See ya around! PS: You're at liberty to delete this li'l 'article'
and what exactly do you mean by 'people like you'? People who are retarded enough to read your work? :-D I'm just kidding
hi.. i just happened to stumble upon ur blog..
loved the short story.. and i think the 'sex scene' has been written well.. since the whole story is written on a rather informal note rather than one of heavy metaphorical value this is well taken..
amazing style...
:)
@ above
thanks alot for appreciating my writing...i personally thought it sounded a tad bit immature (primarily because it wasnt the heavily loaded with the metaphorical stuff)...but im glad u liked it
@kapila
Who says your writing is appreciated!! well it sucks!! hehe just kidding!! :P
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